Great poem. Loved the dark and sinister feeling the poem has. The flow was good and the transition between lines were brilliant. One of the best poems I've read in the past few weeks. 5/5.

I Love this poem. It's amazingly written. 5/5 Keep up the good poems.

Dang that was intence i loved it

I love how you repeated the beginig at the end.. it reallly adds to the piece.. the idea of the poem is a little brutal.. but the flow was good and you did well by describing everything and really painting a picutre (that i could've done without ..lol :D) but great job :D

I love how you repeated the beginig at the end.. it reallly adds to the piece.. the idea of the poem is a little brutal.. but the flow was good and you did well by describing everything and really painting a picutre (that i could've done without ..lol :D) but great job :D

This is just Beautiful..I loved it!...very descriptive 1...wonderfully penned!
repetition made the poem 10 times better!...
Kp writing!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Dude, Love the poem! Definitely one of my favorites. Keep it up!

Wonderful!! I agree with burn your exes!! Wonderful flow. 5/5

Awsome poem, exes sure are a piss off.

Very good write, I enjoyed it. I like how you started and ended with the same stanza. The flow as well as rhymes where good. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

This line, "In the darkness you cannot see" should be, "In the darkness you can not see" because "cannot" is 2 words not 1

OMG WOW im am speechless haha. this was so scary but good at the same time lol. This was very deep and dark. lol OMG i jsut loved it lol 5/5

xoxox
Jess

Wow! Darien, this is really unique. Who would have thought a poem like this would turn out so good. I really love the idea. Your choice of words is also amazing.

"Gasoline leaking in your room
Like the scent of new perfume
In the darkness you cannot see
Light a match and now you're free"

^that stanza is just incredible. that comparison there..great work! keep it up. =]
--Viola

Hey pal, that was a rock solid stuff. A fantastic poem. Just a bit of problem. I thought the poem went off the hook in the middle. But u guided it back well... Anyways, a fantastic effort. Keep writing and njoi.

Hey pal, that was a rock solid stuff. A fantastic poem. Just a bit of problem. I thought the poem went off the hook in the middle. But u guided it back well... Anyways, a fantastic effort. Keep writing and njoi.

Great poem but sad at the same time......

Fantastic write, i was like im watching a movie, with varying emotion, lol, great 5/5

This poem highly amuses me, and always gives me a good giggle. Anytime I have exes problems, I like to come and read this poem, it always lifts my spirits ^_^ 5/5

I THINK THIS IS WHAT ERRYBODY NEEDS TO DO, IF THEY DID MORE HEARTS WOULD BE HEALED FASTER.......

WOWWWWWW... im speechless... AND 30 rates and yet you still hold a 5.0.. that tells you something about this poem. IT'S PERFECT. It is so dark and deep and INTENSE! but so many people can relate.

You did another amazing job on this one.

I'm still speechless.... so that's it for now. haha

Awesomee as helll.
This poem is a really good exapmle of a writer with an amazing mind.
I love the way you let the mood of the poem show through, not a lot of poets do that. Great job. 5/5 Keep up the good work.