Comments : No home, No heart

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Left with nothing but a life on the streets,
    Begging for money off everyone you meet."

    Its one of those things people take for granted, a home. Majority of people have a roof over their head, and food to eat but I think alot of people are oblivious or forget there are people out there who have neither. People will never know what its like to be homeless.

    5/5
    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow great flow,amazingly penned
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Korrenn

    Wow!
    Absolutely amazing.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tad

    That one is very reaching ya know, it reaches out to your emotions, very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Stone

    'No warmth, no safety, no place to go'

    Amazing hun.

    Sam xx

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Oh,god this is so sad,but its really good,makes you apreciate life more,5/5