Awsome!! i love it.. you really do know your stuff!.. flowed great.. everyting is perfect! 5/5

Hello dear,
how can I tell you how beautiful is this poem. many times this was my feelings, I wish i could find a key to unlock that locked heart.
I have not commented on your last poem because I knew you were not that happy with my email, I am sorry.
But you are so sweet and adoralbe person so even if i want to, i cannot be upset with you,lol.
great job.

I loved it.
The emotion was shown. And it flowed well.

'For that key,
I have fought the fate,
Facing all kind of anguish
Toward me.'

Beautiful 5/5

[Sarah]

I truely loved this poem espically the rhyming it was wonderfully written.
keep up the great work

Wow. I nominated this for the weekly contest. Just utterly incredible. Beautiful. It flowed, it was just... wow. You are definitely on my favorites.

Incredible poem. Not one err that I could find.

5/5
~Stephen White

Goran - simply beautiful. I'm adding you to my favourites right now. I love the images created in this one. That image of this big city, and a lost key. I love it!

Just one thing I had to point out, in the last line -

"In the corner in this city", should it not be 'In the corner OF this city"?

Good job.

Wow, nice poem.

Awww soo pretty i love it... this is taking forever to type with a broken thumb lol... it was beautiful, you're amazing, it was great writing as always. i love your poems, i look every day for a new one!!! a beaut! 5/5

This is quite delightful to read. The consistency of the poem needs tightening up, I suppose. You could augment the flow by omitting unnecessary determiners, for instance.
Nevertheless, it is a rather beautiful piece of work. I am quite sure that this write has come from the core of your heart. I am charmed.
Thank you for sharing.

This was a really beautiful poem you have written here i enjoyed it alot as the meaning behind it was portrayed beautifully and your word choice was so strong, making the poem have a beautiful flow behind it. Well done 5/5 much deserved as always.~mel

That sounds alot like me. I liked your poem. the flow was good, and the emtion strong. Thanks for the comment. I am also giving you 5/5 because of your well written peiece

I really like it. The whole concept of the importance of the key.
5/5.

Awww. Well done! Wow, of course you're a great and talented writer. You never seem dissapoint me. You have a way with writing!
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy ^_^

Another great poem:) With great flow and great word choice. I loved this poem. Keep doing what you're doing. 5/5

Hey well done. this poem was fantastic. it showed of great love.

excellent, 5/5 david

Wow goran this is very inspiring to everyone! ur message is really true! seem so great and i love it!

Beautiful poem..5/5..seems like u r in true love..

Ok...Well first in my opinion i wished it would have been longer because I felt like you were taking me somewhere then it just ended. But the choice of wording was good and I think you did a fantastic job!

Wow you seriously have a good imagination to come up with such a storyline, its real good how you can do this you are such a good poet i envy you lol.

xxx alex xxx

That was a very lovely poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I can really tell you spent some time on it. I also liked that you seemed to know what you were talking about and that you weren't just writing a poem just to be writing a poem like so many others do.
5/5