Comments : A fairy tale myth

  • 10 years ago

    by Teesh

    Hey this was a very good poem keep up the good work um no it didn't happen to me it happen to a friend nut still thank you for comminting on my poem k
    love always Teesh xXx...

  • 10 years ago

    by Chained4ever

    I loved your poem. I thought it had truth and real emotion to it. I hope you keep writing and u come comment my poems sometime.

    ~~~~Chained4ever~~~~~~~

  • 10 years ago

    by La La xx Beth

    I like this A LOT. its very well written and i just love it. nice :]

    how could i not see beyond,
    that evil pretty boy face
    how could i laugh with you
    you were covered with hidden disgrace

    how could i fall in love
    with a guy nothing more than a kid
    how could i ever forgive you
    the are still left from what you did

    ^^ thats my favorite part by the way. thanks for commenting me

    xo,
    Beth

  • 10 years ago

    by doug frazier

    I'm afraid there will be many fairy tale myths in your life before you will finally find your own prince charming. But don't give up, the one you seek is out there, just protect your heart and dream!!! Great poem. Hugs from Doug!

  • 10 years ago

    by STEVE

    Sad poem my princess of my dreams has done the same sort of thing to me ,love is just soooooo hard to understand. Steve

  • 10 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    Great job with the poem. I could feel the pain behind it and I can relate to what you are saying. I really the liked your rhyming in this poem. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle

    Aww i lyked this poem it was good but sad 2 love can b crazyy thou n its hard cuz u can't control ya feelins but anyways niice poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow it's so unique... fairy tail myth... wow nice one... keep the good work yo!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Cool

  • 9 years ago

    by amber

    I loved this poem. . awesome.! and so true, but sad :-(