Comments : Understanding

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I wish it would have kept going because it was really going somewhere for me...and I think the only problem was a couple of lines the syllabols didnt sound to good but it only happened once in awhile
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Good Job.. i think this was an awsome poem.. Keep up the good work!.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alesia

    I enjoyed reading every bit of this poem. What I liked most was the set up, very nice. Some of the rhyming wasn't all that great, but it was still a great poem. Keep it up. 5/5

    Alesia

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This poem is very well structured, and the rhyming is really good,some perhaps a lil forced but yer good anyways xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I like it.
    Although...
    It's not really all that consistent.
    You're talking about one thing
    Then you talk about something else.
    Other than that.
    It's good.
    I like your format.
    Everything just flowed off my tongue.
    Well done.
    5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This poem wa sup and down and your rhythm wasn't very clear.
    Just some thing you need to work on 3.5