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by BeautifulxMess   Apr 29, 2007


Hearts will break; Eyes will cry.
Giving up is a road that will fail.
Smiles will fade; Family will die.
In the end you'll turn out to bail.

Never give up, for tomorrow is another day.
Life will hurt, but live it to the fullest anyway.

Hope loose faith; Pain will bit you.
Altogether you want to fall down.
Love turns hate; Lies become true.
Karma keeps its cycle around.

A heart will beat into your chest somehow.
Believe that you can make it right now.

Truth unfolds; Hope finds faith.
Blessedness is your degree.
Smiles turn gold; Love defeats hate.
Eyes open you for you to see.

It gets better in the end, as long as you wait and see.
Hope will find you, and you'll alway be happy.

Hearts will mend; Eyes will dry;
Giving up wasn't even a choice.
Despair will end; Angels will fly.
You will bestow the greatest voice.

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*The song anyway by: Martina McBride inspired me to write this poem. I recommend you listen to it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    The grammar was really well used in this poem, i lovhe way the stanzas are layed out and the meaning also is so powerful. good job

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I liked the form of this poem, how it went from "normal" stanzas to couplets.
    The line "Pain will bit you" should be
    bite you", but that was the only error I came across.
    Very nice, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This doesn't really make any sense to me
    Giving up is a road that will fail.
    Umm...
    Don't you fail already when you give up?
    So wouldn't it be redundant if you
    Repeat it again?
    Other than that.
    It's all good.
    I'll give you a four :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Synh

    I wasn't very fond of this poem because you never say what will make someone stronger throughout the pain and anguish they'll go through. You have many grammar and spelling mistakes as well; please edit your poems before you post them.