I wasn't very fond of this poem because you never say what will make someone stronger throughout the pain and anguish they'll go through. You have many grammar and spelling mistakes as well; please edit your poems before you post them.

This doesn't really make any sense to me
Giving up is a road that will fail.
Umm...
Don't you fail already when you give up?
So wouldn't it be redundant if you
Repeat it again?
Other than that.
It's all good.
I'll give you a four :]

I liked the form of this poem, how it went from "normal" stanzas to couplets.
The line "Pain will bit you" should be
bite you", but that was the only error I came across.
Very nice, 5/5.

The grammar was really well used in this poem, i lovhe way the stanzas are layed out and the meaning also is so powerful. good job

xxx alex xxx