This definitely isn't terrible. It maybe isn't your best, but as usual, it was a pleasure to read. I hope things get better soon, and obviously the emotions expressed in this poem were not the happiest. :P
Lol...this one is no where near terrible...but it's so close to perfect!=)
Beautiful poem...filled with emotions expressed in a simple way...so touching...u portrayed your emetions well thru this one...good work hun!