Comments : Breaking Point

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is not terrble. This is good! Seems it came out straight from the heart... Very emotional and touchy... It's a good write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Venting sometimes exposes our deepest feelings. You certainly expressed deep love here. Very well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, I can relate to this whole poem in so many different ways. This was an excellently written poem. Great Job!!!

    Peace, Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Beautiful poem. It flowed, it was resonating, truthful, heartfelt and powerful. For a "just venting poem" you did wonderful at doing just that in a manner that was both intriguing and wonderful.

    Great job,
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

    (Grammar, Punctuation, and it seems even syllabication were perfect =] Well done.)

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This definitely isn't terrible. It maybe isn't your best, but as usual, it was a pleasure to read. I hope things get better soon, and obviously the emotions expressed in this poem were not the happiest. :P

    :]

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol...this one is no where near terrible...but it's so close to perfect!=)
    Beautiful poem...filled with emotions expressed in a simple way...so touching...u portrayed your emetions well thru this one...good work hun!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 11 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    I wouldent say its amizing but its not bad so i give it a good 4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by tyanna

    Pretty good..the ending seemed to come to quick and not really "end" the poem...You know what I mean?? You did paint a picture in my mind with this one though..4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    Dear its not terrible its so simple and conveying the intended meaning. Thank you for adding my poem to your favourites. tc

  • 11 years ago

    by Boy

    Don't punish me for this love,
    My feelings for you will not go away

    aaah i loved these lines allot. the poems was realy well written. thefeelings and emotions were strong. it make me awesome.
    i will must give you 5/5

    take care
    your friend

  • 11 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Really so beautyful with sweet emotions..... Really i enjoyed. GOOD....:)

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this. A little confusing at times but nothing too bad. Very bittersweet.

    5.5
    :]