Comments : Boys make me laugh.

  • 16 years ago

    by steffff

    Haha. cute ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Gothic Girl in Pain

    LOL!! I love it. It made me think of how my guy friends make me feel. But only one really makes me laugh. And that's all I can say about that. Great poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    This one was really nice...
    the part of the brownies made me think...
    i should use a plate...(and i'm a girl...how ironic this is...)
    great poem
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Haha that's not really true, I don't usually use plates if I eat brownies, but just don't get it on the floor hahaha.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    HAHA, this made me giggle.
    I thought it was cute, and the flow was perfect throughout the entire piece.
    Imagery created vivid pictures.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Awww thanks so much.

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cute and funny look at the opposite sex as teens....your perspective will change as you get older....but you've captured them in essence!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Simple and made me smile XD. Nice job on this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Great poem funny...i cant write funny poems