Into the Heart (Battle)

by Startle Me   Apr 29, 2007


Blood veins and locked chains
The things you will have to cross
A far away journey to encounter
It is an adventure to reach the boss

Yet are you willing to fight,
Willing to sacrifice your king?
A chess match is what it is
With heart and soul on a string

Moves will equal consequences
Are you ready for the beating?
You should be anxious, petrified
There is no negotiation meeting

Yet if it is the battle that you win
And you tear the walls apart
You will win the glorious prize
And conquer the childlike heart

A heart so soft and loving
Locked up in walls and chains
Into the empty halls you will find
Whatever else the heart remains

A naked body you will find and see
With eyes so innocent and pure
A kiss you are tempted to give
The body, soul, and heart's cure

But you will refrain yourself
For you are the gentle knight
Willing to sacrifice your heart
In order to win the fight

**I know, story like. Lol. But still. Comment and vote?**

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "Yet if it is the battle that you win
    And you tear the walls apart
    You will win the glorious prize
    And conquer the childlike heart"
    ^^Lovely lines..Great work!...the flow was flawless and style was good too...5/5

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by rene

    You never cease to amaze me huh. just another great poem. you are truly a great poet, hope to read more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I like the "storyline" behind this poem. It seems like a little bit of forced rhyming is being used in a few places, so work on that, but other than that it was excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aure

    Great poem, indeed a bit story like but it's something different for a change, it showed emotion and mystery, something everyone longs to

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Wonderful story like lol, flowed from within, [= very well written!
    Carissa E>

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