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by Crystal Gaze
I liked it.
It flowed well.
And was just Amazing!
I really don't know how to explain what it made me feel.
but well done.
Good pacing, fluency and clarity. Try skipping lines next time so that the poem doesn't look like a mass of words 5/5
This is the true vampire poem, hehe. I love the whole poem. Are you sure you are not a real vampire?? :-) Flowed really well and for me it doesn't need to be broken into stanzas anymore. It's great as it is. Fantastic.
by Bradley Peter
I had totally forgotten about this piece. Thank you for reminding me. I enjoyed re-reading it.