I think that this was beautifully worded.love the way that you match things together like the roots drinking up the water etc. very well thought out and nicely written!

I will add you to my favourites and rate your poem highly!
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This is a very nice poem, I love the detail you used while describing the poem. I felt it was very appropriately titled, and flowed nicely. Great job!

An exellent poem ,some of the ryhimg was out of place but its nice to see a change :D

xxx alex xxx