Infected With His Deadly Love (Triolet)

by Gem   Apr 30, 2007


It spreads though out my weary mind
Infected with his deadly love
It happens to me every time
It spreads though out my weary mind
I hate the fact I call you 'mine'
Nothing I do for you's enough
It spreads though out my weary mind
Infected with his deadly love

*Gem*

Copyright©GemmaStott2007

Triolet - The first line repeats on the fourth and seventh. The second line repeats on the eighth. The ryhme scheme goes like this; ABaAabAB. (only two rhymes are used)

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this. You were restricted with space but you still did an awesome job on this, but nothing less is expected from a talented writer such as yourself lol. You really did a great job on this, you made it personal but yet relateable at the same time. Great job.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    In the second to last line, I think you mean t[r]ough. This is yet another piece of well written formed poetry by you. Great word usage. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus

    I read this and was thinking... "what have i done!"
    My love isn't deadly so i'm safe :)
    Love you loads
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is a cute poem! I really, really love it. Sometimes I wonder why love is like a disease. Hmm, I wish I could infect him by my deadly love. lol. Well done upon writing an excellent Triolet. Keep them coming! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Just like always
    AMAZING
    not much more to say
    5/5

    xoxo
    Love
    Chelsea

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