Comments : Infected With His Deadly Love (Triolet)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus

    Good thing my love isn't deadly or you'd be a goner my dear =)
    Brilliant as usual
    Love you xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Brett

    Daaaaammn homie!
    guurrrl you gots da skillz dat killz

    I liked it....I can relate to it from my past life as a pet dog, my dam owners were bitc***... :D lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on your formed poetry Gem. Your word choices excellent. Imagery great.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Just like always
    AMAZING
    not much more to say
    5/5

    xoxo
    Love
    Chelsea

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is a cute poem! I really, really love it. Sometimes I wonder why love is like a disease. Hmm, I wish I could infect him by my deadly love. lol. Well done upon writing an excellent Triolet. Keep them coming! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus

    I read this and was thinking... "what have i done!"
    My love isn't deadly so i'm safe :)
    Love you loads
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    In the second to last line, I think you mean t[r]ough. This is yet another piece of well written formed poetry by you. Great word usage. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this. You were restricted with space but you still did an awesome job on this, but nothing less is expected from a talented writer such as yourself lol. You really did a great job on this, you made it personal but yet relateable at the same time. Great job.

    5.5
    :]