Musicians Flaw

by James Nappo   Apr 30, 2007


The curtain drops,
and darkness falls,
the silence breaks,
but no applause.
Instead, just screams,
gasping and long,
haunting forever,
the musicians flaw...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I love it.... and as a musician and a writer this can be taken in many ways.... well done

  • 16 years ago

    by XP

    I'm sort of confused... it's really good. It reminds me oddly of the Phantom of the Opera for some reason. I wish I knew what it meant. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I'm not sure I understand, but I really liked it. The wording and the way you arranged everything was great. I think it was really good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was short but sweet, liked it not too much to comment about well i could imagine the scene 5/5 maybe u could read one of mine.

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