Wow that was short but sweet, liked it not too much to comment about well i could imagine the scene 5/5 maybe u could read one of mine.

I'm not sure I understand, but I really liked it. The wording and the way you arranged everything was great. I think it was really good. 5/5

I'm sort of confused... it's really good. It reminds me oddly of the Phantom of the Opera for some reason. I wish I knew what it meant. 5/5

I love it.... and as a musician and a writer this can be taken in many ways.... well done