Comments : Fight 2

  • 10 years ago

    by Gothic Girl in Pain

    That was deep. 5/5, I like it alot, and it is very, very true.

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely written with a great message....love the last lines!

  • 10 years ago

    by Concrete Angel

    I really like it but the connection you made between ours was different. Mine was about some one I didnt love, romantically. she was my best friend and the poem was to open her eyes because she was kinda in denial about a lot of things

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Ah very well done. it was different and refreshing. it was subtle yet not too forceful.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Aint that the truth...
    lovely work!
    I just submitted a butt-load on poetry lol!

  • 10 years ago

    by LiveInMe

    Well done... true and it reveals what you believe.

  • Good job! really tru lol!

  • Good job! really tru lol!

  • 10 years ago

    by Timmmyy

    This poem was really guud 5/5 :D

  • 10 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Nice jobbbb! [=

  • 10 years ago

    by Mark

    What can i say it was a good poem ^_^ this time ill just leave with a positive comment instead of more of a negative one
    Mark
    4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Drayton

    I dunno wat 2 write besides that that poem was really good

  • 10 years ago

    by Destiny

    Good Job!! Beautiful work!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Amanda Quintana

    I like this pome!!It really is tru

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    So very true and very well written, but on line 7, in my opinion, I think you should use the word loss instead of lost and the word least is spelled wrong, unless you wanted them to be like that then never mind lol. Overall it was very very good. Keep writing!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful poem!....it'l look better wth a few spellings corrected.but all the same-it's great!...i liked it!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Milo

    Ha nice, i like this poem alot, somehow it has rythem and thats good. keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Kitty Kat

    I really like this poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by Melly

    Interesting, enjoyed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    I really enjoyed ths, very deep, and well written.