Comments : James (so sorry)

  • 16 years ago

    by Static

    Your forgiven dave, no harm done

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    Hey David

    sorry you had such a bad day at school. This is a great poem to say how sorry to your friend. I hope he does forgive you for what happened today. Well great poem 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Oh wow, i hope you can make up with your friend, it sounds like he was really important to you... and you really showed it very well in this poem...5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey!..Beautiful poem!..great way to apologise to ur frend!!!...it's just wonderfully penned....kp writing!
    Tk care n God bless
    xxPoojaxx

    PS: I hope things r better btw u guys nw..try to make it wth..he seems to be very important 4 u...

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Omg!! David this is beautiful! Absolutly Beautiful!! I loved every part of it your so extremly talented! Wow!! blew me away once again when I thought it could never be done...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    David
    this is really sad. I can feel your pain in the words you have penned. Hope your friend and you work things out.

    Gah James I'm so sorry
    I am crying within, no matter what I say now
    CAN NOT describe my hurt and dread
    Please forgive me, somehow...

    This stanza says it all.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    This was so sad ,and yet so beautifully written.If the friendship you have is true then I am sure your friend will see why what happened did happen ,for if he is a friend he will know you like no other and its a true friendship that can forgive and gain strength not just in good times but bad times too ,because a true friend is there no matter what.

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Oh thats so sweet of you to write this for your friend [[= you relee are a good friend and i am sure that he knows that and he will forgive you E>
    Carissa

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    Txeee, this is really sad...you made me actually cry...
    beautifully written though...
    5/5

    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by KAP DAR

    Your words of wisdom
    To open my eyes from my blindness......i like this part and also this poem makes you think....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    So sad, yet such a sweet thought to aplogize with rhyming words. straight from the heart. i am soory you had a bad day, and I hope thinks only get better, and that your friend forgives you. THe flow was grand, the word choice wonderful, and the structure was great. 5/5 one more time.