Comments : My Way Of Life

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx

    I think im gunna add u too one of my fav writers lol ur an amazing poet... chek out sum of mine it wud mean alot... xx
    ~shell~

  • 16 years ago

    by C How

    U and me both

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    That was really nice piece of work...i like the way u expressed ur emotions.

    Good job!!

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, very well written great flow, and wording was great, depression is something everyone needs to look at more and stop trying to avoid, so many people cutting them selfs, call there self easing the pain, excuse me but thats causing pain, any way, great poem , you did a wonderful job getting your word out , thanks for sharing, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really liked the ending. In a way, it spoke of positivity, maybe hopefulness. The emotion was clear, and strong. An enjoyable read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This really shows your feelings you could tell you needed to let it out! the flow was great and some good rhymes! keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    It seems as if you pour your heart and soul out into each poem you write. I think that's wonderful.
    Poetry can be a great form of therapy in a way. (not saying that you need it lol) Just saying your stuff seems to come from within. Which, by the way, makes for a wonderful write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This was an amazing write, you used such stron words and it was full of emotion! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    This was an amazing poem.. its so powerful, nd heartfelt, i can relate to this poem; how life is hard sometimes, and you think you can handle it but then the smallest thing tips you over the edge. The flow was good throughout your peice, and it was simple yet effective. a great write!
    5/5
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    (Nieve) I absolutely love that word, to me it is really strong and you pulled if off nicely. The word choice was quite simple in some places but still effective and the flow was almost chant like which made it really easy to read. To me this piece was really capturing to me as if you put your heart into it. Overall a 5/5 from me. A really good effort, keep up the good work. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Great poem. So emotional and the rhyming was not forced and the flow wasn't arkward at all. Not too long and to the point. 5/5
    Do you not understand?
    I can't do this on my own
    I need someone's help
    I'm tired of feeling alone
    Fave stanza ^^^^^^^^

    ~ Lainey

  • 16 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    I'm sure many people can relate to this poem. A good amount of teenagers these days are depressed. Just know you aren't alone. Good flow, might want to make your vocab more advanced.

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    I really like this one. It had a great flow and great lyrics. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Nice poem...ggreat rhyming...^_^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This is a good poem.. But i dont really like the suicide type poems.. but your writing was really good.. Great Job.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    I just need to accept the fact
    Depression is the way of my life
    I need to become stronger
    Without picking up that knife

    favorite pharse
    good poem work on flow/tempo

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    :) hooray! hope!

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    A very good poem it was filled with so much emotion and the rhythm was flawless.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Uhm ok..ill always encounter same words..try to make it more new to the eye..wel its just me..5/5 for it