Wow that was trully great, starting off peacefully and relating nature and gods and a broken heart, nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Mohamed
Very deep and intense thoughts of pain and sadness in this piece. Great job!
Take care love Cindy

Nice poem
really sweet n nice use of imagery really set a mood
I loved it 5/5!
beautiful poem

Hello,
Aww thats good.
yay nature!
Sihinta xx