Errr....your words, stir things, they have depth n meaning u put things in balck and white, you have a talent 4 it, i love all your works so far

Awakening...

The Angel of Secrets

Beautifully written hun! i loved it..!!!!!!! wow!! my mouths stil open lool dis is soo well written it should be published! i like the contrast between world peace being a curse! your words and themes in your poems are awesome and this is the best ive read on the whole site!! keep it up!! ur in my favz for definate!
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I loved this one... it had a lot of meaning in it and was flowed and written amazingly. 5/5

I love your writing, and this is one of your best, it was great, and it was worded to wonderfully

I really loved this poem the way you led the message through and the ending held the same stanza and feelining I think I have to say what I seen of your work this is my favorate great job!!! Plot121

Wow....words can't decribe how amazing this poem is! amazing work!

----tara

Nice structure as well as flow. The rhymes were good. Keep up the great work, you are truly talented.

Peace, Joe

This was very interesting. When it first started out it reminded me of Macbeth. The turning point was unexpected. War tears people apart. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Loved the middle
great job
i liked it alot
you did an amazing job

Hey about that poem contest ii have no idea what iiam supposed to do but ill try my hardestokay much love and ii love yur poems there real great

Wow, wow, and again wow! This really woke strong emotions in me. It's so powerful, with great message.
The topic is outstanding, and you wrote this piece brilliantly, it's truly deep.
I can't chose my favorite stanza, I simply like this piece from the beginning to the end.
Amazing poem!

I really did like this poem The images were great the message was profoundly impressive and the way you carried it to the end was fantastic. I have read all the work required and find you are very good keep up the worth while writing Plot121