This Pain In My Soul

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   May 1, 2007


These feeling, I keep deep within my heart.
Hidden they were from the very start.
I try my hardest to hide these fears,
Starting with my cold and painful tears.

Placed upon was his horrible spell,
Angry he was, he took me through hell.
I thought he loved me, he said he did.
Never did he tell the truth, from it he hid.

Into his intelligent trap of lies, I did fall.
Near me, was no one to cry for help at all.

My problems, yes I know, I'm well aware.
Year after year though for him I did care.

Someday I do hope to break from these chains.
Only then will I have truly released the pain.
Until I've been freed, under his spell, I will be.
Lured into his trap, please don't be like me.

This is an acrostic, first letters of each line spells a word. For most if not all writers here, you already knew this. =) Thanks for reading, feel free to give me feedback if you want. =)

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  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Grate poem.the flow was a little harsh but I loved the first letter thing LOL that was cool.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Ohh!!!.....Beautiful wortk...very strong and fab choice of words ...and this peice has a lot of emotions filled in it....Great work!!..Kp writing!i give it a5/5..as always:-)
    xxPoojax

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    WOW I enjoyed every line in that poem! I like to write in Acrostic form ;) well done! Such a beautiful poem! keep writing ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Hidden they were from< I think that doesn't make much sense, maybe something like: Hidden there from.. so on.
    Other than that one thing, I loved this poem. It was a great write. Keep it up, hun.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful write!......good job!.kp it up!!!

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