Comments : Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by Leanne

    I love how this poem ended on such a positive note, for a poem written on the spur of the moment i think you did an excellent job. With poems that have a repetition in them i seem to struggle making them sound good but you seemed to have no problem with it. Great write hun 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Loved this poem. Letting go of things is such a hard thing to do but the way you ended this brings on a smile :)

    Goodbye all the tears, the pain and the strife
    And hello to the happiness of love and new life

    Excellent job!
    Take care Love your friend Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly

    Good job! 5/5 good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I like this one so much. It means quite a lot to me for having uplifted me from my supposed-to-be-unknown sadness within. A real smiler poem indeed. :) It made me smile too!
    Thank you for sharing. Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    AWWE wow gem you have talent. This one made me happy and I am so happy that your becoming happier even if it is because marcus. great job as always. you deserve the best poem writer out there.
    5/5
    love you
    chelsea

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wonderful.
    Letting go of the past is a hard task for me & I'm still trying to accomplish it. A very inspirational poem!

    "Goodbye all the tears, the pain and the strife
    And hello to the happiness of love and new life"

    ^ My favorite lines. Wonderfully written, keep it up! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "see no more" < any more.

    I liked this poem, actually. When I seen all the 'goodbyes' I thought I'd hate it. But, it was quite amazing. I use to write these kinda poems.. like last year, they'd help me deal with things. I still do every now and then, makes you feel as if you really let a load off, eh.

    You did a great job with this, and I wish you the best of luck with your 'new' life. :D
    Keep it up, hun.
    <3 Teria.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautifully done.
    The repetition used gives the poem a lot of impact, and the way it ended made me smile, I liked how it was so poisitive.
    Flow was flawless throughout and the imagery used created vivid pictures.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus

    I hope you're not saying goodbye to me!
    =)
    Good use of repetition honey
    I love you
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Wonderful poem

    "Goodbye all the tears, the pain and the strife
    And hello to the happiness of love and new life"

    Fave ^^.. always something great coming from you and always looking forward to reading your poems, keep it up and excellent job :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awww this is cute i like that way you ended the poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wowp oems with repetition of the same word throughout normally sound really simple but you pulled it off lol keep writing :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nice...all about the passages in life....hope the future is a bright one for you!

  • 16 years ago

    by kmx210

    Wow i love your poem. i can see your loved.

    good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    Wow, great job! 5/5 I loved it.

    ~Lizzie~

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Aww Gem. This was relee inpirational to me. I relee enjoyed it, as i do with all of yours. Write moree! i just love your work ( not like you havent heard me say that before)
    EE>Carissa

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, the repititive lines were good and it had a good flow and he ending was excellent, great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rinji

    This poem was absolutly great. You make everything sound like it's going down hill. Then in the end you leave with a positive note. Well Done!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sasha

    This is a really nice poem i enjoy it very much.. its starts off kinda sad.. but then is happy in the end.. two thumbs up

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Lol another amazing poem gem! your work is just so enjoyable to read!

    Goodbye to Lady who is sorely missed
    Goodbye to all the boys I have kissed
    Goodbye to clothes that are too small for me
    Goodbye to the past, and all it's debris

    lol i love every word, but this part just stood oiut to me, great job

    ----tara