DADDY'S LITTLE GIRL

by Estefania   May 1, 2007


I was once your little princess.
No one but me.
I wanted something and i would go strait to daddy.
Everybody knew that were ever you were they could always fined me.
Nobody could hurt me or touch me or make me feel bad.
you were always there to pick me up when i got sad.
But than one day things started to change.
I stopped being your princess and soon you said i was your worst mistake.
You pushed me away.
And once told me that dogs were better than me.
So much hatred i saw in your eyes towards me.
Not knowing what i did for you to treat me like this.
At first you made me cry,
but now all i can say is good luck in your life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Very good poem. sad one too. i liked how u made ur poem around the total contrast between the feelings ur dad had for u. i'll give u 5/5 but u should know that there are some typing mistakes that take away from your poem, so u should probably have a look

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Chrissi xX

    I know how that feels, except it was my step dad not my dad, but it's the same feeling. You wrote it well. Well done. And thanks for the comment on my poem xx

  • 16 years ago

    by shirwa

    Man wat did u do wrong haha but yea this was interseting... nice good job

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Oh thats pretty sad. It had a good flow but there were words you didnt spell right, like:

    3rd line: strait should be straight
    4th line: were should be where and fined should be find
    7nth line: than should be then
    and the 9nth line was a bit too short for the whole poem considering all the lines were longer than that one line. Thats all there is, spell freak? maybe, I just like things to be spelled right lol sorry anyways it was a good poem!! keep it up! 4/5

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