Oh thats pretty sad. It had a good flow but there were words you didnt spell right, like:

3rd line: strait should be straight
4th line: were should be where and fined should be find
7nth line: than should be then
and the 9nth line was a bit too short for the whole poem considering all the lines were longer than that one line. Thats all there is, spell freak? maybe, I just like things to be spelled right lol sorry anyways it was a good poem!! keep it up! 4/5

Man wat did u do wrong haha but yea this was interseting... nice good job

I know how that feels, except it was my step dad not my dad, but it's the same feeling. You wrote it well. Well done. And thanks for the comment on my poem xx

Very good poem. sad one too. i liked how u made ur poem around the total contrast between the feelings ur dad had for u. i'll give u 5/5 but u should know that there are some typing mistakes that take away from your poem, so u should probably have a look