Kiss In The Rain(Acrostic)

by BeautifulxMess   May 1, 2007


Kiss me with you soft undying lips I long to endure.
In the mist of it all, the world appears to be secure.
See the love that we embrace within our crimson hearts?
See how I can't live without you; If so, I'd fall apart.

Insane feelings that I've never felt beat within me.
Nothing changed the way I feel, or what we could be.

There you are, standing before my very eyes that gaze.
Here I am, lost into the kiss that put me in that daze.
Everything in your way shines like a diamonds glaze.

Rain beats upon our skin as we touch for what we feel.
And even though we're young, we know that it's real.
In another eyes, you could say we see each others pain.
Never have I felt so breathless, like a kiss in the rain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    The last line was my favorite out of all of them. It was such a sweet poem. Full of innocence, and grace. The word choices were amazing. I really liked the strong sence of love and passion in this cause its so true how a little kiss can hold sooo much more. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    Really good poem
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by puregoddess

    This poem was beautiful.
    You are very talented.
    I'd really appreciate if you commented and give me feed back on some of my poems .
    Cyaa xxx. def 10/10 =]

  • I love this poem......great job......keep on writting and you shoudl check out some of my poems.......thankx.....and 5/5.....

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Wow, this was so adorable [[= haha cute
    Carissa