Summer

by Cantchangeme   May 2, 2007


Summer doesn't see me no more
winter seems to stay for the fall
Summer doesn't no my name
And now I've lost my faith
And I've lost my mind
Now all seasons are the same
In my mind they'll help me find you

Sweetness don't taste sweet anymore
So just let me go to myself
Because you don't know myself at all
And now I've lost my place
And I've lost my face
Now all deaths look the same
Maybe they'll help you find me

Breath don't help me breathe no more
because we hardly even talk
And maybe life will still make me crawl
Because I've lost my way
And I've lost my sign
I still have my spirit
But I'd give my soul to find you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I can relate. I have felt like that a couple of times. Anyways well written. The emtions were strong and clear. There was a little bit of a grammer problem, but nothing big. I would say its all in all a great write. 4/5 keep up the good work