Sometimes I find myself asking the same question, Why me? but then if you think about it, why anybody? This poem is really heart felt I liked it.

Very nice poem. So sad and touching.

I think everyone asks the same questions from time to time. I am almost speechless, this is so beauiful written, and the word choice is excellent. I could feel the emtions in this, and they are deep. Pain whats that? Anyway well written. If you keep writting I will definatly keep reading. 5/5

Very, very good read. an excellent fluency and a really well chosen lexical choice. this was an amazing poem who's structure and form really added to it.

it was sad and i hope you don't blame yourself.xx

I can relate, i feel like i have a conversation with God alot on this topic. thx so much for taking time to read my poems :)

Tracy
They say God will not give us more than we can bare....I think you and I are here for a reason....You show a strength and courage to others. great job on your poem.

Why me Lord, why so much pain
things I do, can't always explain.

These lines really touched my heart.
Take care
Cindy

This is an amazing poem. ive been reading a few of ur poems and they are all very good. they have so much emotion. and i just want to say im sorry the situation u grew up in. no one deserves that! great job!!! 5/5

What an incredibly heart wrenching write. I have read a few of your other poems and I m assuming that this one may have something to do with being abused as a child. And the painful memories still follow, haunting.

But I pray to you Lord, about every night
we can work together and make things right.

Well I have to go now, have things to do
it's always a pleasure, just to talk with you.
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These last 2 couplets bring hope. The Lord hears our every prayer (so I believe)
Touching read, wonderfullypenned

God Bless dear heart
Take care
Luanne

I love this poem. Sometimes i think it seems that he never answers but deep down i believe he does. I wish i knew why he seems to let others suffer so needlessly and allows the vurnreable to be harmed and unable to fight back. I suppose there is a reason for everything and its not for us to know. This is a terrific write and i think it relates to a conversation we have all had in our head and one point or another. So many unanswered question. Terrrific (5/5) Take care.

Kelly
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