Last Tears

Great poem

ps sorry if my comments are getting shorter it is just that you gave me alot of poems to look at:~)Sam

PSS.Keep ^ the good work

This is it,
The last of my sorrow.
Only one thing's for sure,
I won't cry tomorrow.

Wow this stanza is very cute and catching. Loved the structure and how you have made all the way coherent and cohesive.

Keep it up
Fsams

It was simple, short, yet still touched my heart, it was sad, yet you just have a way with your words. it was an amazingly written piece, nothing i can say to this would make it any better. loved it. 5/5

Such a simple piece of poetry which was effective and so strong. I loved the emotions you portrayed into this piece, they were dark yet sad mixed together to for this strong poem. The flow was spot on definitly a good read.~mel

First stanza?
Simple and perfect.

Second?
Gawd, you're good. :P

Til there's none.
That would sound better if you say
'Til there is none

Only one thing's for sure,
Change that.
It just doesn't flow that well..

All in all?
I loved it.
I rarely say that to poems :P
Be proud of yourself, dear.

5.5