A Rusty Chain[Kyrielle]

by BeautifulxMess   May 3, 2007


No body listens to the cries of a young girl hurt.
A little girl at the age of three cries tears that stain.
Heaven has long abandon her, as she burns in Hell.
She tries to escape, but she's locked with a rusty chain.

How can she go through with what she has fought?
Helpless as she looks with fair skin and eyes with pain.
She feels as if she is unwanted and disowned from all.
She tries to escape, but she's locked with a rusty chain.

Hope gave up on her the day she gave her first breath.
Since her birth, God never never stopped the rain.
Mom and dad hate each other, but her even more.
She tries to escape, but she's locked with a rusty chain.

*Deffinatly not my best.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Personally i thought this was a very good poem. such a good flow to it. good rhythem and great use of emotions. It shows that this came straight from ur heart. Nice job
    5/5
    ~Shannon~

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    I agree, it wasnt your best, but it was still EXCELLENT!! Well done. It had so much emotion and detail. Awesome work. Keep it up ^_^
    Xx Chrissie