Okay...
Maybe I am a bit perveted.
But I was completely drawn
To the two first words
In your poem.
Strip me...
It made me want to read the rest.
But still, the poem wasn't about sex.
It was about asking your lover
To stay with you forever.
I thought it was really sweet...
I wish I could give you some other feedback
Other than that.
But I think this poem is just beautiful.
I don't want it to be changed :]
Five out of five, m'dear:p

Your poem really grabbed my intrest and keept it. The word choice was excellent, The emtions are raw, and strong. You really did a good job on this. 5/5

I loved it, reading to first to words just made me have to read the rest, that doesn't make me sound to good, but i loved it, it was amazing, the words, the structure, it was great 5/5

Beautifully penned poem, it flowed nicely, I can feel that you really love the guy whom you dedicated this poem to, well done.

Just a suggestion:
Help pick me up when I fall...
-Help me stand up when I fall...
Or..
Please pick me up when I fall...
^^Maybe it's just me xD

5/5!