I'm very proud of you honey
This free verse is excellent and the language and the style that you've used when writing it was amazing
Hehe, thanks to listening to my suggestions as well when you were writing it =)
Another outstanding piece from you!
I love you loads!!
*Kitten*
xxxxxxx

Good poem.
Its different to what I have read and it flowed well.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

This poem in really inspiring, it makes me think that everything is part of a bigger picture.
A fantastic subjectto write on too! I think it's awesome when people think of ideas to write on that are out of the ordinary.

Well done great work 5/5 x

It didn't seem vain. it was quite good, with intelligent wording and rhythm. i like the solar system / universal concept you've got going there.

in an odd sort of way, it could also be seen as a reference to a terrorist attack, which gives meaning to everyone. i really love it. very very well written. : D

Excellent job ,different but powerful, keep up the good work..your friend Tracy,,,,,,,5/5

Seems like this is receiving a lot of in depth comments honey!
I'm so proud of you!
Love you!
*Kitten*

I really, really enjoyed this piece of work, its really strong, i loved the supernova ending it symbolizes the whole power of the poem. very very good.

I liked this poem, a lot. There was one little thing though..
"Or I can fade to emptiness, I have the power to give life, and take it away,"
^ That was a bit long, and threw off the flow a bit, I think it shoulda been broken up into two lines.
Other than that, you did a wonderful job with this poem.

Keep it up.
5/5

Hey,
an excellent poem, the flow was overall great, and i love the ending it was very good, i really enjoyed reading it, you deserve a 5/5! keep up the good work =)

kisses stephanie

This is great. great flow for a free verse poem. very easy to read. a lot of emotions in this poem. keep up the great writing!

Reeking with vanity? hehe maybe... but then it had so much power... you captured the feeling so well that it passed on to me... as i read it, i felt as if there was a burning flame within me... great job there

~angel~

It's intense.
I found it also kind of funny.
You're right.
Vanity.
You are the super nova.
I liked that part.
Lol.
It was weird.
very, very different
From what I've read.
I like it :]
5/5

Love this style and the pasion in this great job..pls read my newest poem and my poem The trcherous Season-the feasting- when you get the chance thanxs. 5/5

melissa

Whoa this was pretty awsome, so potient [[=
Carissa

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

Really well worded, and such good imagery created, i really enjoyed it. it did not seem vein, it seemed meaning full and thought provoking. i got the impression it started as random thoughts and then, as if going through a sieve, became more refrained and focused. i loved the ambiguity of supernova.

Well done sweetie for making the top page =)
Love you xxx

Excelent, alot of feeling came through the poem when i read it.

Hey i liked this marcus, you used some great words to create a good image =]
5/5 =]
~*~Jen~*~

I wouldn't say this poem 'reeks of vanity' as you put it, I view it as being full of power. There are some fantastic images here and it is very well written.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka