Before life ends

by bon   May 3, 2007


We all look at life
At a different point of view,
We all get exposed
To something we're not used too.

We all get offended
In a different way.
We can never just listen,
There's always something we must say.

But those who are older,
The ones we call wise,
Always tell us to stop
Or we'll be our own demise.

I hope that we may listen
And maybe on others we can depend.
Then maybe we can realize the meaning of life,
Before our live ends.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful...
    I adore the lines:
    ''We can never just listen,
    There's always something we must say.''
    I thought they were very intense.
    The ending was beautiful and elegantly written, a perfect way to wrap up.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol...Tia is right...the subject u choose is Great and the poem is soo very inspiring...kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Interesting subject to write a poem on, very touching. another 5/5 it was good. i think that it is amazing how it is so i don't have any constuctive critism lol. Keep it up!!!

    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    Great poem it's so true! 5/5

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