Comments : Battles of the Heart

  • 10 years ago

    by Dirtbikechick

    Hey i like your poem... i know how that feels and you just cant win...it sucks

  • 10 years ago

    by Christy Redding

    Nicely done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is great lots of meaning in it great job i like the last line good job deep stuff here and thx for the comment

    keenan

  • 10 years ago

    by Lozbi

    5/5 i can relate 2 ur work so much
    keep up the gud work
    .x

  • 10 years ago

    by ALEX

    I love love love this poem! The words fit together so flawlessly. "My feelings don't shut off that fast" That's my favorite line. It's just magic, you know? Great job!!

  • 10 years ago

    by The Even Numbered Nephew

    I like this one a lot, but theres a couple things that could be messed with to make it flow better. if you wanna discuss it more then send a message my way. but overall it was really good.

  • 10 years ago

    by Zeus

    I absolutely love this poem. It was very well written. I liked how you compared love to a war. 5/5 excellent job.

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Another beautiful emotions poem you portrait here, "sometimes life's like a cloud, we never know what would be happen..." well done!

  • I live this poem shows alot of emotion toward that person and how you feel good job 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This is such a good poem. i enjoy reading ur work. there all straight to the point and i see nothin wrong with them.. ur very talented.. n i can relate to this poem alot. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Maurice Carpenter

    Good stuff i enjoyed it