Great poem, sweetie.
Keep up the writing and thanks for the comment

I like it alot :)
ur alot beter than most people on this site

Thanks 4 ur comment. i really like ur poems. they are very inspirational. and very meaningful. they are great. keep up the great work.!

Hey thanks for commenting me on my work i just started to think about myself and then the word just begain to flow out of my mouth, i seems that is how you poem went i really like it!!! you seem like a great guy and a guy that would have girls all over you the way you put those word.
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Thanks for commenting.
I really enjoyed reading this. its truely beautiful. well written.

Thanks for da comment on my poem.. well dis was actually pretty good keep writin.

Awww...that's very very heartfelt and sweet. How is it that you have two poems and already so many comments??? Congrats on making such an entrance on this site!
Charisma*
P.S. But when you ask other people to read your work, try leaving a more in-depth comment on their work so that it doesn't come off as an advertisment just for your own! :)

Wonderful. Though I'm a guy, I know exactly how you feel. And what I wouldn't give to feel the same again!

When I read this peom it reminded me of when I was in love and by reading it I can tell you are in love. But my advise to you is be carefull because love can ethier kill you or make you.

That was very good....God definently blessed you with talent!

Heyyy wow....tnx 4 the comment and this is amazinG! i love it<3 it's rely indepth and tat's the beauty

Beautiful and though i have similar feelings, couldn't have worded it better... but i will try!

Omg tat was such a good poem....

good j0b

meggs

Good descriptions
but you need more structure

O.M.G.! LOL U MUST HAVE FELT THIS ABOUT SUM 1... THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD.. IT'S SHOWS ALOT OF EMOTIONS!
~HAZEL~

Awsome poem! 5/5! its really deep and emotional! well done!

Emma
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Sweet poem 5/5 keep up the good work Steve

Heyy i really thought tht this was really good...ur a good writer!

thnx for commenting on myin :)

bye bye
megan

This is a very very good poem, i really liked it...and thanxx for commenting mine. <3

Wow i really liked this poem it drew me in as a reader 5/5

if you get the chance comment some of my stuff i hardly get any :(