This is cool!!

Wow this is amazing. great flow and word usage. a lot of emotion in this poem. i love the message. keep up the great writing!

Hey,
a beautiful poem, I love the first stanza,
the flow is great as wel as the rhyming,
I enjoyed reading it 5/5
kisses stephanie

Truly amazing. I am speechless really. You word choice was moving, perfectly chosen
The flow was flawless, and the emttion strong. You have out done yourself this time. If I could it would be 10/10 but you;ll have to settle for 5/5. I would be such a loss if I had not read this poem, I am glad you asked me to read it. Thanks for the commetns.

Wow.
I was enchanted by your first line
I thought it was going to be story
But it turned out it was
I was glad. :]
I love your analogies.
Leap of faith?
Loving it.
I don't know what else to say
I was left speechless by this poem.
So I will stop typing
And just give you a 5/5 :]

This is awesome. I love it!! =]

Wow. I kind of have mixed feelings about this poem, it was very good on some levels but then on others I think that it needs a little bit of work.

"A leap of faith where I crashed
Cause I didnt think of landing
All that mattered was to jump"

my favorite lines because I think its so true a lot of times we don't think about the consequences we just live for the moment. Nice job.. I also loved the last verse as well because it reminded me that no matter how much you are hurt and no matter how badly you think your heart is broken it always continues to beat and to play the song of your life. Wonderful write. Perfect title if was flawless, drew my attention, and fit the poem to a T. I think that the first stanza needs a little bit of work because its so short that it knid of loses attention toward the rest of the poem. But overall nice work.

I love this poem!! So many people can to relate to it=) You are a good writer!!=)

This poem was absolutely amazing and I can relate to it so much more then I can tell you. You really hit home with this piece and I think most people would feel the same. Excellent job 5/5 once again GG23

I like this poem a lot, it holds so many greatly described emotions and it's really easy to relate to this piece in so many ways. Your descriptions are great, and the flow of the whole piece is flawless.
Great job on this piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-A leap of faith where I crashed
Cause I didn't think of landing
All that mattered was to jump
To you, my heart I was handing-

I totally loved this poem. It seemed a bit sad, but I like it.

Great job!!!

5/5

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I can relate to this so much it startles me. This one was written exceptionally well. Your vocab and rhyming good, and your flow flawless. I can definately understand where you are coming from, it is hard to get over someone, and it's even harder to understand why you can't when you have reason to. These lines touched me a lot;
'Sadly, I had expected too much
Or maybe 'twas I expected at all'

Most of the time, that is the problem. Expecting too much of someone, especially in a situation of lust, or love.
An excellent write & an enjoyable read. 5/5

Tammie :]

I really loved the words you used to paint the atmosphere in this poem very well done and the emotion remained very strong great read Plot121

Wonderful job!
I loved it!
again the rhyming was right on
you did an extreamly good job
the vocab was great
5/5

A very touching story. Liked the poem very much, the rhymes and structure are perfect as usual. 5/5

A leap of faith where I crashed
Cause I didnt think of landing
All that mattered was to jump
To you, my heart I was handing

LOVED that stanza. That is sooo easy to relate to. I think this piece had a few lines where it sounded like you were just trying to rhyme them, but overall, i really liked it and it reminds me of my own poetry. Good job!
*ME*

I really enjoyed the way it flowed and told a story!
5/5 from me!

Nice work i love it

Yet anothing great piece. i can relate to this 1 a hell of alot lol.
5*