Comments : The Little Box

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    AWWWH!
    This was so cute =)
    beautiful imagery, beautiful word choice and flawless flow.
    I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    That is a magnificent poem. And a very very cute story. Alot of detail...i just loved it! Well done! Xx Chrissie

    I wish the best for you both x

  • 16 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    OMG fantastic flawless ... this was one of the best poems ive ever read no1 cud of rote it better tht was im lost 4 words just amazing x

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    This is a lovely poem. It's so nice the way you put your engagment to verse.

    The lights are dimmed down for the atmosphere
    The romantic mood is heightened this year
    A candlelight dinner, a table for two
    A rose in a glass is glistening with dew

    I really love the imagery of this stanza.
    Take care love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    SOOOOOOOO PERFECTT!!
    Where do you find men like that??
    I envy you lol
    Again i love it!!
    Carissa [=

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus

    I wanted to cry when you said yes honey :)
    Love this one
    I love you
    Marcus xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    What a charming piece you have here, ma'dear! A lovely work which could easily move the readers of your craft by such 'unprocessed' emotions. Congratulations for the both of you lovebirds. ;) Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awww that so cute i like this. yay go gem!! getting married !!! i really like the ending when he pulled out the box and the heart thingy...yea thats cute. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Wow, that is truly romantic. Sounds like you've met your perfect match and someone who can spoil you. A beautiful story.
    Keep it up, I love hearing your stories and your incredible love affair.

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Awwwww gem, its so touching , lucky girl that must be the most special moment for you.thanks for sharing with us , love ya :)
    Great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    God i shed a tear too when i read this :'))
    it was just perfect as oneday i hope i'l get that far but for the moment its a dream thats out of reach :(( this poem is perfect in its devotiona and love, just amazingly perfect in every way, shape and form :)) 99/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Another good poem . the rythem was good up to the last line.

    All it took was a box to change their whole life

    it didnt seem to flow with the rest of the poem. but i cant put my finger on what doesnt fit.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Omg, so beatiful. Romantically sweet, i love it, every single bit of it! And congratulations :D

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    That was so beautiful. I love it.

  • I absolutely love this poem.
    Well done on winning first place.
    The love was shown and the flow was flawless.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    Another wonderful poem, so much detail i love you poetry you are a fenominal writter you should really publish it

  • 16 years ago

    by Krazy

    This completely touched my heart, i'm amazed how wonderfully you turned your proposal into such a fantastic poem. the flow is perfect, word choice magnificent, and everything about just works! great job, and congratulations! 5/5