Hey,
an excellent poem, when i was reading the first stanza i was thinking what it was about, but the end made it clear, I love it 5/5
kisses stephanie

It's self = itself.

Nice metaphorical poem! I really enjoyed it, and I love the sarcasm. This is much better than the other one!

Good job!

5/5
~Stephen White

(I didn't find any err's.... lemme double check...)

No hyphens:
*--it's easily broken.*

Wow, nice poem! It was a little confusing trying to figure out what it was, in the beginning but in the end it made sense :) Enjoyed reading it!
Nice Write 5/5!

That was a good poem, and I would agree that it was fun to read. It was a really well written poem, the flow was good, well penned.5/5

What an awesome twist. I wasnt expecting it be about something like that. Really cool how you manipulated the words into some sort commercial thing. I loved it, honestly. It sounded so heart broken and cold but beautiful nonetheless. 5/5

Hey!!...Beautiful poem!!...i thpough i found it hard to comprehend the whole idea 2wrds the start..i liked the way it progressed....luve it!!...Good write!

Aw beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading this! good flow! great structure! kepe it up! 5/5!

Short and sweet with nice wordings and a beautiful flow. I like the way you have written it. Very well penned. Tc