Comments : Forever (reverse oddquain)

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    Cool never seen this style before... I like it when people try thease differnt types.. and the poem has a beautiful message =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Erin

    I learned those type of poems in class yours is very well written great job

    love erin

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Cute. :D Good job.
    One thing: " till I am" < would sound better as until I'm.
    Other than that you did a wonderful job with this. Cute, short, sweet. Love it. :D
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Cute poem hun

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem, it a pretty cool style, i got to try it and u did good, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by awww

    Im not quite familiar with this style but i liked it :) it's like after every line there's a pause and it gives much more impact than simply writing it straight... good job, well thought out :)

    ~angel~

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    I never seen this style before, but i like it, very creative.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a great little piece of poetry you have written here. Short but expressive nd so sweet. Loved the form and style. Well done on this i think it deserves a 5/5 in my eyes~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!...it's a beautiful poem!
    Very well written!...very sweet poem!
    Love it!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    The funny thing is me and a friend were just talking about this style of poetry. very nice
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Short and sweet 5/5 hunny!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aw its like a quote but I Like it.. I can't do this kind of poem lol. anyway great poem! good choice of words! well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job on your formed poem.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow so short yet still so powerful. I loved it. And its true I think that everyone has some sort of love in their heart always no matter what, its just weather they are able to share it with anyone else that matters. Nice work, so simple and eligant(sp?) especially with the strict layout that you went with. nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by kayla massie

    I really like this style. i cant say that i recognize it too well but it is very unique and i really like the message so keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Great reverse oddquain =) I "Love" it

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Cute :D I think it would do better as a quote though, but it is still great :D a powerful meaning!

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Cute poem. There's not that much to comment on, because it's quite short. It didn't make me think, "Wow, that's amazing!" but you managed to effectively put the message across, which is what we look for in a poem.

    Nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Awesome job!! It is short and sweet and to the point, but powerful. It has such meaning crammed into few words. Flow and word choice and everything rocks. 5/5 for sure!!!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle;l.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    'till' = 'til

    Other than that one mistake I'm pretty sure it was perfect. Syllable count was just right, and the flow was pretty good.
    Overall you did an amazing job, hun.
    Keep it up!