Dreams, and reality

by ellewen   May 5, 2007


All around us
light flourishes
time beyond me collapses
as I turn to you
vanished memories reappear
the sound of your voice
a sweet whisper echoes
melodious tones
harmony I have found
in the memory of your touch
like a shadow it creeps through me
beside and beneath
withered footsteps
accompany the sound of breathing
among us
someone is near
like a weed we arise
like a breath i escape
like a dream i am not real
like the apple that wasn't sweet
a taste so common yet we all seek
like the rain I continue to fall
out of the dream and against the wall

(this was a 5 minute thing, and I was extremely upset by one of my dreams. I know it has no rhythm and no scheme, or stanzas, but i think it is worth reading. just don't remind me.)

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  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Hey I love this one...
    This poem if filled with great emotion...
    I like the flow too...
    Great job...
    You deserve 5/5 for this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. this poem is quite powerful and you have done a great job!

    you have talents and i believe your putting them to good use!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I was so wrapped up in the flow i did not miss the rhyme scheme, as i have said many times i envy that skill. The poem was enjoyable, and so worth my time. the depth olne deserves an excellent rating

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow. now this was pretty confusing for me, but still it was so beautiful even though i did not understand it very much.
    when i read the title 'dreams, and reality'
    i was anticipating something much different, but this was brilliant. even though there wasn't any sort of structure or rythm really too it, it had a certain flow to it that made it one of the most wonderful poems i have ever read. (i'm not kidding)
    it doesn't seem very sad too me though, just sort of sweet, but 5/5
    gabriella

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    At first...
    I was unimpressed.
    It seemed sloppy
    But when I actually read the bottom
    About it being only for five minutes
    Then I was impressed.
    I wish I could talk about my emotions
    As well as you just did.
    Well done, m'dear :]
    5/5

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