What are you talking about? It does have a little bit of a flow to it, and I think that its welll written. The word choice here is what makes it a great read. You have definalty outdone yourself this time 5/5

Great poem.....u seem to have put a dark feel into this
5 / 5
i rearly liked this one keep it up
x lucifer x

At first...
I was unimpressed.
It seemed sloppy
But when I actually read the bottom
About it being only for five minutes
Then I was impressed.
I wish I could talk about my emotions
As well as you just did.
Well done, m'dear :]
5/5

Wow. now this was pretty confusing for me, but still it was so beautiful even though i did not understand it very much.
when i read the title 'dreams, and reality'
i was anticipating something much different, but this was brilliant. even though there wasn't any sort of structure or rythm really too it, it had a certain flow to it that made it one of the most wonderful poems i have ever read. (i'm not kidding)
it doesn't seem very sad too me though, just sort of sweet, but 5/5
gabriella

I was so wrapped up in the flow i did not miss the rhyme scheme, as i have said many times i envy that skill. The poem was enjoyable, and so worth my time. the depth olne deserves an excellent rating

Wow. this poem is quite powerful and you have done a great job!

you have talents and i believe your putting them to good use!

Hey I love this one...
This poem if filled with great emotion...
I like the flow too...
Great job...
You deserve 5/5 for this one