M. i like this poem but i think that there is a missing piece in it. there seems to be something. mm.. idk what it is tho.

Another great poem.
The emotion was shown and the rhyming didn't seem forced.
You are a talented poet hun and I love your poems.

Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

OH MY GOD! this was Amazing great imagery too! this is my fav of all your poems :) keep writing my friend I enjoyed all your poems! another 5/5! as always keep it up!

I like this line very emotional.
I just want to cry my whole heart out,