She's letting it all go;

by Teria   May 5, 2007


Rage, Rapture, Tears.
A cold floor holding blessings
that are still unnoticed.
Frames holding pictures,
that just seem too fake.
But, reality is held within,
the happiness of family.

Rage, Rapture, Tears.
A cold floor holding blessings
that are still unnoticed.
A nice, warm hug
after a long day,
that's just pushed aside,
in order to continue to blame
(everyone but herself)

Rage, Rapture, Tears.
A cold floor holding blessings
that are still unnoticed.
A phone call ending in a fight,
though it's been way to long.
Seventeen months, to be exact,
but still dwelling on the past.
( she continues to run).

Rage, Rapture, Tears.
A cold floor holding blessings
that are still unnoticed.
A life passing her by,
with no smiles at all.
She's letting it all go;
the blessings she received.

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Wow, this poem is written amazingly. And is very strong. Keep up the great work. 5/5
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  • 16 years ago

    by stefanie

    Wow... this poem really captured my attention.... i can feel the emotion coming through from it... great job. i love the structure and the repetition of lines works with this one. i love it. and thank you for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    This peom really got me, you desribed your feeling into words oh so well> kepp it up i look forward to reading more of your writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the repetition in this poem! very effective! well done! a great poem! keep it up!

  • I love it.
    I love the way you structured it.
    The emotion was shows and the imagery was great.
    Keep it up hun 5/5

    [Sarah]