Its over now

by mohamed   May 5, 2007


I have seen the changes in you.
i have noticed every steps that,
you where taking away from me.
but i don't want to see that all.

you told me in many ways,
you where saying it so loud,
you where saying it so clearly,
but i don't wanted to hear any.

cos i believed so strongly,
that we where born to be one.
i believed that you too,
believed in the very same way.

but now it doesn't make any,
difference in what i believe,
you had made your move
now your gone away forever.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow that's a great poem....I love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Oh wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...it is so amazin..I did love ur poem although it was so sad..keep it up5/5..
    I thought that u r from Egypt just bcoz of ur name..it is nice to meet u Mohamed..:)

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Deep feeling of love and hope,but its life nothing still the same, sometimes we feel it but we dont want to beleive as we know its hurt to lose someone you love so deep forever, i enjoy reading ,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Really nice poem!!!
    keep up the good work

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "you told me in many ways,
    you where saying it so loud,
    you where saying it so clearly,
    but i don't wanted to hear any."

    Sometimes we block out what we don't want to hear, a defense mechanicsm (sp?) i believe.
    A very emotive poem, you've done a great job on this, keep it up!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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