Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep it up. Chek out some of my poems, when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Mohamed
Very sad poem. Your pain can be felt in the words you have penned. Good job! Keep writing.
Take care Cindy

"you told me in many ways,
you where saying it so loud,
you where saying it so clearly,
but i don't wanted to hear any."

Sometimes we block out what we don't want to hear, a defense mechanicsm (sp?) i believe.
A very emotive poem, you've done a great job on this, keep it up!
5/5
*Gem*

Really nice poem!!!
keep up the good work

God bless u

Deep feeling of love and hope,but its life nothing still the same, sometimes we feel it but we dont want to beleive as we know its hurt to lose someone you love so deep forever, i enjoy reading ,5/5

Oh wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...it is so amazin..I did love ur poem although it was so sad..keep it up5/5..
I thought that u r from Egypt just bcoz of ur name..it is nice to meet u Mohamed..:)

Wow that's a great poem....I love it 5/5