Peace Creature

by carissalynn   May 6, 2007


Towering over, massive and peaceful,
Trampling everything, call me immense.
Skin so dense, worn with age
Yielding black eyes, deep with enigma.
Hearing extravagant, with an elongated trunk
Large i am but peace i make.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Very good poem! Love th content.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    Such a peaceful poem. I really love that last line, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    Carissa, you blew me away with this poem! This has to be the best piece from you that I have read. You have so much talent hun, I can see big things for you when it comes to writing poetry. This is the first step to becoming great! When I first started reading, I thought to myself, is this the same Carissa? This seems like an adult writing. It's great reading poetry from young talented writers. Keep it up hun!

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh i absolutely LOVE this write!!!

    your original style and creativeness with words is astounding!!

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