Oh i absolutely LOVE this write!!!

your original style and creativeness with words is astounding!!

Carissa, you blew me away with this poem! This has to be the best piece from you that I have read. You have so much talent hun, I can see big things for you when it comes to writing poetry. This is the first step to becoming great! When I first started reading, I thought to myself, is this the same Carissa? This seems like an adult writing. It's great reading poetry from young talented writers. Keep it up hun!

Such a peaceful poem. I really love that last line, great job!

Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.

Very good poem! Love th content.