I Hunger The Kisses You Bestow(Triolet)

by BeautifulxMess   May 6, 2007


I hunger the kisses you bestow
I long to unfold your hearts desires.
Hung upon every feeling you show.
I hunger for the kisses you bestow.
Looking into your eyes that glow.
Igniting every spark that fires.
I hunger for the kisses you bestow.
I long to unfold your hearts desires.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MyDevotion

    WOW this poem is done so well, For something so short you created this temporary flow of not wanting it to end, and honestly I read it over a few times just because its that good! very catchy and I think those who don't like love poetry will even appreciate it for its structure! well done! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I was caught between
    Awe and amazement.
    This poem is wonderful.
    I hunger for the kisses you bestow.
    I got chills from that.
    And I'm not a romantic.
    Oh my, what have you turned me into?

  • 16 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Wow. This poem flows like water and it just rushes and impacted me in such little time... it was amazing. What a wonderful poem, and what a wonderful repetitive line! I love this, and with restrictions the outcome was so wonderful!

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

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