More Than Incredible (Rubiyat)

by BeautifulxMess   May 6, 2007


I'd give everything I have for you.
You amaze me with all that you do.
I can't have you slip away from me.
Because you are all that is true.

True as you can be and wonderful.
I love your eyes that are beautiful.
You will never fade out of my mind.
Because you're more than incredible.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short and sweet. It could be longer or more with a deeper sense to it. But it's a love poem, that's all that needs to be said. Lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nicely written great poem which has best rhyme and also best flow.
    i can feel romance, emotion, love, and reality in this great poem. keep it up.

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