Excellent Poem, sorry to hear about your father.. hope for all the best!

I can totally relate to your poem! It's such a terrible thing to lose someone you love...
Great poem though.

Great poem! Wonderfully written! I feel lke that alot because my grandma, Uncle, Grandpa, andmy nephew have all passed away within 2 years! Anyway great poem!

This is terribly sad. I can really feel the emotion in it, and the style which you wrote it in gave it a great flow and emphasis on the things you were saying. A very well written piece. 5/5

Tammie

I know exactly how you feel. One of my close friends in school committed suicide even though i was his mate but he was picked on and bullied, and i blamed myself for a long time for not being there to stop it. I hope you come to terms with your grief someday.